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なにも言いたくないのなら そのまま無言を歌いなさい だれも聞いてくれないから だれにも聞こえなくていい 言葉などなくていいのです どんなすばらしい言葉でも それは言葉という道具に 言わされているだけなのだから だから僕はなにも言わない なにも言いたくないのなら |
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2012年06月17日(日) 03時13分34秒 公開 ■この作品の著作権は非さんにあります。無断転載は禁止です。 |
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| No.6 flllllllllllllllllllll反現代死fllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll 評価：20点 ■2012-10-28 13:12 ID:te6yfYFg2XA | |||||
| 非とゆー名前がいいですね。；、ｌ；、、。 | |||||
| No.5 非 評価：--点 ■2012-06-25 08:28 ID:7wB7nyFAfGY | |||||
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ひまわりさん、葉津京一さん、笹百合さん、さかさきさん。 ご感想、ありがとうございます。 なんでもない文章をお褒めいただき嬉しく思います。 |
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| No.4 さかさき 評価：30点 ■2012-06-23 12:50 ID:bWjCk.64/Qo | |||||
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無言を歌いなさいという表現が確かに深いです。 言葉に踊らされて感情を伝えることのむずかしさを説くような哲学に思えました。 |
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| No.3 笹百合 評価：20点 ■2012-06-18 23:01 ID:D4btj63JLkc | |||||
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最後の２行がないほうがすっきりまとまるような気がします。 無言歌集の美しい旋律を思い出しました。 |
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| No.2 葉津京一 評価：30点 ■2012-06-18 21:31 ID:fy0iMKP7UZk | |||||
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私の思う「言葉」っていうものは、自分で紡ぐものという 認識があったのですが、 ＞それは言葉という道具に 言わされているだけなのだから という連を読むと、また違った「言葉」の見方ができたような 気がします。 なにも言いたくないのなら言わない――。 それもいいと思います。 |
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| No.1 ひまわり 評価：30点 ■2012-06-18 15:26 ID:tedSfVqwjSE | |||||
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無言を歌いなさい＿＿＿＿＿＿深い表現ですね。 |
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