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たくさんのひとが
それぞれの部屋の天窓から
水晶になっていく大気圏
眺めて
夕暮れ！夕暮れ！と
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粗野な儀式



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お気にいりのサスペンダーの鉄っぽさ
匂い
鼻腔の湾に満ちてた和音たちは
いつもやさしいなら



曇りの師団の
第三次世界大戦
悲鳴が赤いね
もっと残酷なふりをすればいいのです
不謹慎なほうが
きれいだね



おもわず見送ってしまう木星のあかるさ
虹色の砂糖や　
涙という音をすこし疑うような
なにも決まらない脳内会議のあと
愛してるをダイヤモンド語でいうのはどうすればいいの？
そんなふうにごまかして
ぜったいに
決定されない
ぼくたちのこと



希望なんて
わからないままでよかった
どっちかっていうと
最寄り駅は水たまりでしかなかった
ずっと待ってるきがした
残光を
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2012年10月13日(土) 10時13分22秒 公開
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ハロー！すごく昔、もうＨＮも忘れちゃったけど、（たしか、et al.って名前だった。）
僕はこのサイトから詩を書き始めました。
２００９年とか２００８年でした。あなたたちはみんな居なくなってしまったんでしょうか？ぼくはいまでもこうやって詩を書いてます。詩人たちがあつまるサイトも作るようになりました。で、この作品はそのサイトのいちコンテンツに投稿したものです。よかったら覗いてみてね（宣伝）

ハロー・ハロー。そんなふうに気まぐれに呼びかけてみます。あなたたちはどこに行ってしまったんでしょうか？ぼくはあなたたちの背中を追って、こんなとこまできたんです。いなくなっちゃうのはナシでしょ。もっと詩を書こうよ。お金にならなくても、女の子にもてなくても。あなたのその無為に思える言葉も。だれかをそこまでけしかけるかもしれないんだ。だから詩をたくさん読ませてよ。あなたのとっておきの詩を。


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No.3  ん〜  評価：40点  ■2012-11-07 14:20  ID:ycUJN/7upDY
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et al. san shitteru。
No.2  flllllllllllllllllllll反現代死fllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll  評価：20点  ■2012-10-26 14:17  ID:te6yfYFg2XA
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No.1  藤村  評価：30点  ■2012-10-14 02:10  ID:sg12n8JFuiY
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木星とダイヤモンド語とが好きだなとおもいました。
邦ロック！な感じを勝手に受け取ってしまって、それも好きだなとおもいました。
眺めて、もいいなとおもいました。
犬か猫かでいうなら（くだらないこというんじゃねえよ）犬っぽい詩なのかなあとおもいました。
総レス数 3 　合計 90点

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